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Thread: The League final pt. (for now)

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    Cathy and Jessica's hands just missed each other, allowing Dan to fight his beautiful daughter in the middle of the ring. And instead of letting go of the ankle when he caught her, he holds on and starts swing her around by it. After about five o six turns, he lets go of the ankle, and SLAM! Jessica's shoulder bares the full force of impact with the chrome steel pole in the corner. She screams in pain and falls grabbing at her shoulder. And being the kid at heart that Dan was, he lines up and kicks his daughter as hard as he can in her bent over ass, connecting with her pussy and driving her shoulder back into the pole.
    "Oh this is going to be fun", he says to himself.
    "It's time fo rall the Bloems to participate in this fight." he yells. "Debbie, Jennifer, come up here and grab your big sister's arms, one on each side of the pole."
    So Jen and Deb are now getting into the fight, and they're ecstatic. They run to the ring and grab both of their sister's arms thought the middle and bottom rope so she's facing them.
    With her back to her father, and her sisters grabbing her arms, Jessica feels very helpless, and gets ready for the pain that is about to start.
    Dan stands with his feet on each side of his bent over daughter, with his crotch above his daughter's ass. He makes his hands into fists, and starts pounding the back and sides of his daughter. With each pound comes a grimace from Jessica that Jen and Deb can see.
    "Hit her harder daddy, I like watching her face when you hit her."
    Dan is punching Jessica full force, right,, then left, then right. The area over her kidneys are already turning blue from the punches. Jessica's face grimaces more and more with each hit.
    Jessica starts openly sobbing when Dan tires from all the exertion of punching her in the back, and starts doubling his fists together to slam into her lower back. Her back is completely black and blue from all the strikes.
    Tiring of this attack, Dan tells his two daughters to let go of Jessica's wrists. Once they do, he grabs her by the ponytail and lifts her up. She can't stand on her own now after all the punishment she has taken to her back. He grabs her arm and wrist and turns violently, swinging her into the opposite ropes. He waits at the other side for her to return, and bends down to lift her shoulder first. He stands up and jumps as high as he can with his daughter laying across his shoulder, and flips her with his arms still around her knees and all his body weight pushing into hers as her back and head slam into the canvas.
    "Don't go away yet sweethearts, I need your help again. Stand up on the apron there and hold on to the top ropes."
    They do.
    With that, he gets up and pulls Jessica up by her ponytail again. He flips around and throws her with all his might into the chrome pole back first.
    "OK, grabs her arms again girls, this time we're going to work on her front side."
    "Yay!" they scream as they grab her wrists again and pull them over the top rope.
    Jennifer grabs Jessica's ponytail and pulls violently back, so her head won't be in the way of her daddy's fists.
    So Dan approaches as his two other druthers are standing on the outside of the ring, pulling back the arms of his beautiful blond 15 yearold daughter. He smiles when Jennifer reaches over and pulls back on Jessica's hair.
    "Your so very proud of these, when you put on a bathing suite, or tease all the guys at school with low cut tank-tops." He says as he pulls her top down to her waist, stretching it out, and exposing his daughter's firm milky white c-cup breasts. Her breasts are white, even though the rest of the beauty is tanned. Her nipples are very small and dark in sharp contrast. It makes her breasts look even bigger that she has such small nipples.
    All her schoolmates, boys and girls, are crowding around to get a good view of Jessica's precious boobs. Along with catcalls, there are calls to break her also.
    "Make it so she can't walk again"
    "Pull on those tits til the nipples come off"
    "Pound her fucking face!"
    These calls are coming from even her friends as they become so aroused at the site and tingling at the potential violence they are about to see. Right now, even though Jessica is their friend and classmate, they want to see her scream and cry in pain. They want to see her cry and beg for mercy. And above all, they want to see her hurt.
    With his other two daughters holding Jessica ready, Dan squeezes and pulls Jessica's nipples eliciting a cry from her.
    He then pulls back with his right arm, and punches her fist sirts in the right tit, hitting her so hard he can feel the back of her chest bone. Her tit just explodes around his fist as it is buried deep inside her. It turns instantly red when he pulls his fist back. Jessica screams, and Jennifer pulls back harder on her hair so she doesn't slip down the ropes.
    Dan pulls back, and does the same with his left fist and her left breast. Then he goes crazy, as he drives fist after fist into his daughter's breasts. Jessica screams, cries and begs for him to stop.
    Jennifer and Debbie keep her arms back and head pulled back and yell encouragement to their dad.
    "Pound her dad! Hit her tit's all around. Punch those bags. Keep hitting them dad. You can do it. That's it, imagine they are speed bags!"
    Jessica's tits are getting smashed as Dan is starting to sweat from the workout of punching his daughter. Jessica is openly crying as the pounding of her beautiful full perky breasts continue.
    The crowd is chanting his name as he smashes, left, right, left in to firm breasts. Jessica's tits are swelling as the beating continues. She thinks to herself she could fit into a d-cup now with all this abuse. That thought leaves her mind as Dan changes tactics, and once his hand is fully drawn back, opens his fist, and gives Jessica's breast a full on slap. The breasts are already red and swollen on the blond beauty, now they start to turn a purple color as Dan starts to slap them all around. Jennifer and Debbie still have a hold of their sister, so the only things moving are her tits as they get slapped around. Jessica has almost passed out from the pain, and her head would have fallen over already if Jennifer didn't have a firm grip in her hair pulling her head back. This is getting out of hand.
    As Dan takes a victory walk around the ring, he grabs a hold of his wives hair and pulls her over the ropes by it. He yells to Debbie and Jennifer to have fun with their sister as he takes care of their mom. Once Cathy is on the other side of the ropes, he halls her up by the hair and smashes her in the face with his fist. She falls, and he grabs her by the hair again and brings her up to crotch level. He brings back his leg, and pushes forward to crack her in the face with his knee. Her nose explodes in blood as it breaks with the impact of his knee.
    While dad is having his fun, Jennifer and Debbie pull their sister out of the ring, and decide to finish what their dad started. Debbie stays in the ring with Jessica's arms pulled through the bottom ropes, and her already weakened back supported by the ring post, feet on the outside ring floor. Jennifer goes to get the discarded baseball bat form earlier. Once back, she lines up a hit, and nails her sister, right in the right tit. Jessica screams as her tit is squashed against her chest. Her tits start to leak a blood through the nipples, going down her stomach.
    The crowd is torn on which of the action to follow. The young Bloem getting her tits destroyed by her younger sisters, or the beautiful older Bloem getting beat to hell by her husband. Cathy's face is a mask of blood as Dan continues to knee her in her already broken nose. Jessica is blood from the tits down as she continues to get hit in the chest with the baseball bat.
    "This ones going to be a home run sis." She says as she lines up another hit with the bat. She pulls back and BAM!, nails her sister full in her left tit. It explodes in a mess of blood and glands and pinkish goo as it couldn't take the beating.
    "Yes!" screams Debbie and Jennifer. "Lets do the other!"
    They continue to Pound on Jessica's right breast with the bat until it explodes in the same fashion. Seeing their older sister destroyed, they turn back to the ring to watch their did finish what's left of their mom.
    "Get her dad!" They scream as he continues to pound her face with anything he can. She is bleeding from every par t off her face as Dan continues to hit her.
    "Break her back dad, break her back!"
    The crowd picks up the chant, even her close family and friends, caught up in the beautiful destruction of their friend. They wish they were the ones in the ring pounding Cathy's face and making her bleed. The chant gets louder.
    "Break her back!"
    "Break her back!"
    "Break her back!"
    Dan looks around at the crowd and waves his hand.
    Cathy is oblivious to the world, as it seems that she's lost a lot of blood through her face. Dan leans down and picks her up in the body slam position. The crowd goes wild. He then exerts himself so he is lifting her over his head straight armed. She is a broken woman laying there inert with blood down half her body.
    She opens her bloody eyes and she makes contact with Dans'
    "..do. it.." she mumbles, "break me.."
    With that, his face goes into a sneer and drops her down and switches his hands so he's pushing her down while falling. He sticks his knee out, and when she hits it full force, everyone in the arena can hear her back snap. It was like the sound of a large branch snapping, only it wasn't a branch, it was a beautiful woman who had just had her back broken in two by her husband. She layed over his knee bent at an awkward position. Her eyes closed, and her breathing ceased. She lay like that, sprawled over his knee dead for 5 minutes before the cleaning crew pulled her off.
    It was just another night at the arena.

    This was it. I hope you enjoyed the last part. Next time I'll wait until it's finished to post the whole thing.

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    EXCELLENT!!! Oh yeah, my kinda story, thanks MUCH!

    MikeJV

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    Cool

    More please. Don't burn yourself out, but damn. More please.

    Incredible situation and drama. This is a gold mine approach.

    Needless to say I wanna see this become a new Genre on Mike's board. The family fight board never dared to really do this this way. It was policed by Folks who basically thought you had to apply "taste" and "community standards" to fantasy art to make it acceptable free speech..

    Fantasy has to be free to say just anything or it has its nuts cut off.

    PS Thanks for the board Mike. You rock. [img]cool.gif[/img]

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    Oooh, I like. Loved the first two parts also, I just usually prefer to hold off until a story is completed before I toss in my two cents.

    All I can say is good work, great story, and I hope you can come up with more! Five stars!

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    Ted, I know that board well, and you're soo right about most of the folks there it's not even funny. I totally agree about fantasy, if you make fantasy "PC"... you're basically neutering it. *SNIP SNIP* and that kinda stuff isn't gonna happen here. You want clean fantasy write it yourself or rent a disney movie... this is NOT the disney forum, this place is for hardore fantasy fans, that's why I created it. And barring something big happening, It'll be here a long time.

    MikeJV

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    Ohhh... that was beautiful. Thanks!

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